I watched my grandpa
For the first time
On 35mm
Watched him laugh
And kiss grandma
He never was real
Until today
When the images recalled
The grin of a moment
Few people are alive to remember.
Before I was thought of
A story was being woven
And hearts were feeling
The space between the words
All the subtle feelings of
A tall pole of a man
Foreshadowing my frame
Gone before mom’s sun had risen
The long morning shadow
Reaching all the way
Into today’s living room
Man, this is a really good one. I think these are the best closing lines to a poem you’ve had yet.
Agreed. This is far and away your best work so far (in my opinion).